subwimpwm
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#1 · Edited by: subwimpwm
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Picked!
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subwimpwm
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subwimpwm
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Absolutely no idea if that poll has showed up or not. The link to the poll in the archive is here: https://www.cuckoldplace.com/index.php?action=polls&step=view&pid=1112 &showPopUp=1 |
subwimpwm
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As someone asked: Seven-to-one (which should actually be called eight-to-one, my bad) is about a henpecked loser highschooler who lives with his mom, his aunt, and four sisters, including his twin. It's a highly female dominated environment, seemingly by design. Chris never met his Dad, and it seems his ****** had no particular interest in having a male influence in Chris's life. As well as being the youngest, Chris is treated with either pity or disdain within the matriarchal household.
His sisters, aunt and ****** are all protective of him, and when they discover he's being picked on by a classmate called Demetrius ("Big D") they resolve to make sure their little brother is unharmed. Teaming up with his school welfare officer - another powerful woman in Chris's life - the women help Chris show his supine, feminine side to the bully in order to demonstrate the young whiteboy knows his place. Will this be enough to placate the tormentor, or will he just take, take, take?
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subwimpwm
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Is there a general lack of interest in these, or did I just bollox up the poll somehow?
If it's the latter, does anyone know how to unbollox it?
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donna4blackuse
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#6
It is one fantasy of mine that will have to remain a fantasy.
Loving Wife, Mother, and Bryan's Slut
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kennyboy82
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subwimpwm: 6.) Sweet William: A frustrated housewife attempts to solve her boredom and money problems by taking a job at a strip club - but there's more to the establishment than meets the eye donna4blackuse: It is one fantasy of mine that will have to remain a fantasy. That's a great pity Donna, I would love to watch you working a horny crowd of frustrated guys, getting them all hard for you! |
subwimpwm
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donna4blackuse
The rough draft I have of this is about a pseudo-femdom strip club. The women are all very empowered, making large amounts of money, exploiting the horny, frustrated wimps of this small town. Do they enjoy their work? Very much so... and they help one another appreciate it once they're backstage.
Without giving too much away, the main character's husband is a clitdicked little wimp whose demanding wife has trained him up to be an absolute pro with his tongue. The ladies share him round like they're passing a joint, and his needs become less and less relevant to the coven of dominant strippers.
That's my rough draft. Me being me, I also have a version where the club caters to diverse tastes, and has a policy of trying to support underprivileged communities. Ahem.
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subwimpwm
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donna4blackuse
If you'd be willing to tell me a bit more about your fantasy, I'd be happy to work it into the story. How is it i've been writing erotica all day and THAT's the filthiest sentence i've typed?
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kennyboy82
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subwimpwm - because that's the effect Donna has on some guys!
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subwimpwm
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kennyboy82
Meant to ask: should I read you as having voted for #6?
Incidentally, I'm in a writey mood, so will probably dive into something in the next half hour. JUST IN CASE ANYONE ELSE FANCIES VOTING.
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subman
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Definitely #6
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