Some humiliating ideas for a cuckold magic story I'm writing?

I've been busy writing some more for Taking Me Down A Peg or Two but am also working on another story this weekend...

First, I have to say this may not be to everyone's taste! It's (very loosely) based on a roleplay I did with an ex-gf and it's sort of a story within a story, taking place as an internet messenger conversation. I create a roleplay premise and she's a bit reluctant at first but then starts to get into it, eventually getting too into it and it gets out of my control!

The roleplay premise is that thanks to a jealous ex-gf, every sexual partner my gf has ever had is magically summoned into a room and we're all lined up in a row in front of her naked. For the sake of the story, that's 12 of us.

Then we're compared - the first round is basically a kissing test. I'm at the end of the line so must watch my gf snog every ex. Naturally she really gets off on it, and is getting hornier and wetter by the great kissing. I won't spoil it and say where I come in her rating! You can find that out when I upload the story here!

Then, I try and steer the roleplay to something a bit racier. I ask her to compare our bodies and rate them, expecting her to look us all over and comment... but it goes a bit wrong as she rather likes the first guy a bit more than I bargained for - some unrequited passion! So she ends up sucking him before she strips off and he fucks her. The whole time, I have to watch from the end of the line!

Then she's sweaty from being fucked, so then she takes the second guy into the shower with her...

I won't describe every different sex encounter she has with each of her exes but I have to watch each and every one. Turns out my girlfriend rather enjoys the idea of me waiting and suffering while she revisits past sex partners!

Anyway, part of the story is that I can't leave the spot I'm on and I can't wank. Yes - I'm chucking in lots of humiliating stuff and 'suffering' here.

Another part - and this is the bit I'd really like your help with - is that every time I complain, whine or protest in some way, something magically happens to up the humiliating scenario and make things worse for me or improve what's happening to her and the guy she's with. I'm really not holding back with this one!

Here's a few examples:

* She sucks on one guy's cock and the more I complain, the messier it gets.
* She's wearing a ring I gave her and as I protest while she's in a clinch, each word of my protest causes the ring to slip down her finger (she's unaware), until it eventually slips off and lands in the mess of saliva and cum left on the floor from her sucking earlier. Then, while she's getting frisky with this guy, she (again unaware) kicks the ring across the floor and it's lost.
* My complaints cause my view of her getting fucked to get obscured. With the first guy, my view is obscured by the other guys in the line and I end up having to stand on tip-toes, peering around them to try and see what is going on.
* For the shower guy, I can only hear what's going on as it's in an adjacent room and maybe catch a glimpse of something through a tiny portion of the frosted door that I can see from where I stand (remember I can't leave my place at the end of the line). I can hear something going on but am denied knowing exactly what! My complaints cause the door to steam up more so I can't even see anything and for them to turn the shower up so I can only hear odd bits (she describes what she's doing though, so the reader will have a much better idea of what's happening in there!). It also gives her a sudden burst of energy, where she gets really frisky with the guy she's in there with!

Now I need more ideas for things my complaining or whining can magically cause in this scenario!

I plan to start uploading this story once I have done more to my current one, Taking Me Down A Peg... The one I'm describing above is currently on my PC.

I can't promise I'll use all of them but if you can think of something humiliating for me and/or that will make things more exciting for her and whichever guy she is with at the time, please post here!

Since we are talking about magic and the things that happen to you don't have to be real it could be almost anything.

You could have something happen like when you complain your body freezes in place, even your eyelids, which when you blink would cause them to stay shut and you can't see what is happening right in front of you.

Maybe if you complain enough, you would suddenly feel what she is feeling, when a guy pushes his cock to the back of her throat you would feel it happening in yours as well. When he spanks her ass you feel as if it happened to yours. When a guy unloads on her face yours becomes sticky with cum too.

Just a few quick thoughts, it is an interesting concept for a story that I am interested in reading when you post it.

Thanks Jbozz!

I love the freezing idea - maybe that could be used as a little 'timeout' when I complain. I'm made to stand to attention, facing dead ahead while she is getting busy with one of the other guys.

Like the spank idea too - that sounds very humiliating!

since it is magic,.....
- you could make it that you are somewhere in the middle of the line and every time you complain, one of the later guy's cocks get bigger and so you move down a spot as they move up.

- where jbozz was going, she feels it, you feel it, but then you start liking it and wanting to be her 'slutty friend/assistant' as time wears on.

- every time you complain another ex appears in front of you.

- after some point, you end up in a different place with TVs showing everything in all directions and have to find your way back to the room they were all in. there are hot chicks there that you attempt to have 'revenge' sex with but they are stronger and end up with strap-ons fucking you. or she invites her friend over and makes you mimic her actions on her friend.

How about every time you complain or she has an orgasm, she gets a little taller and sexier or the other men get taller or their dicks get a little bigger. or you or your dick gets a little smaller, maybe you shrink do enough to become a her human sex toy, or the only way to get your size back is eat all the cum from an orgasm and if you miss any you may not get back to your full height. On a side note I like the idea of being short enough to orally please a women while we are both standing (if it were possible)

Sorry for taking a while to reply - I'm loving these ideas!

I do like the idea of moving down the line - I've already stuck myself at the end though (wish I'd thought of that idea). I am using it to good effect though - I keep having my view obscured by all her horny exes so I can't see everything that's happening! We're kind of chronological order so me being the current boyfriend puts me at the end.

I do like the idea of a subtle size change. I like the idea of a girlfriend being taller in heels so maybe I think she's wearing heels, only to look down and see she's actually bare foot... I don't think I'd want to shrink too much though as not sure where it could go once I'd be tiny but a subtle change could be nice and humiliating.

Adding extra exes in could be interesting... not sure where they would come from though? Maybe one night stands that she never told me about or maybe guys she has fantasised about start appearingtoo . That could be interesting!