Peter and Cindy

Timmy

I'm sorry, I missed your previous post while I was on vacation. That was a great story with a wonderful ending. Thank you for the hard work you put into it. It is appreciated.

GH

Timmy

All good things... I think you wrapped it up nicely. I know the time and effort you must have put into this story and your many other threads. Thank you for sharing your time and your talent.

Zinc

Timmy,
This story always was about Cindy, the abusive but strangely compelling bitch. When she left you either had to bring her back (all but impossible) or somehow re-introduce her character. From the history and her character, Adele couldn't stretch that far without her character or Peter snapping. In the end it was pretty much both.

This has been a really great story overall. Maybe you should have stopped it after Cindy left and Adele became the happy ending. Both this and your other stories, as well as your huge body of captions, show your fascination with powerful, dominant and sometimes even abusive women to a cuckold husband. So far, as a story, the formula seems only to work as a work in progress. To get to an ending, if the use side continues unchecked, it either becomes farcical or the cuckold has to bite back. You are at your best in this and your previous story where the wife rides the edge of reamister with her cuckold and drops off every time, just in time, but on his side. It's great narrative but does not get to a conclusion. Essentially it becomes a hugely extended caption telling a section or snapshot of a life but not an ending.

I don't mean this to be seen as a criticism at least not in the destructive sense. Perhaps a critique. This has been one of the best stories that has ever appeared on this site, and when you are ready, I would love to see more. Thank you for giving it to us.

In the words of the great Vinny, "It's been emotional."

Thank you for such a great effort and great story Timmy...Touche' T27, Touche'

Excellent ending to an epic story. Thank you for all of your hard work.
Loving Wife, Mother, and Bryan's Slut

Great ending, I loved the story different from our run of the mill cuckold story

Ms Donna, GH, Zinc, Bnbincols and Vazkor,

thank you all for your comments and kind words. I'm glad you liked my story.


Peak, thank you for your comments and insights. I hear what you are saying. In a way, I guess the story came full circle since the very original concept started out as a set of captions, but I wanted more, so I scrapped that idea and now it is what it is.

Again thank you all for reading this story.

T.

Peak, that is one bad-assed comment. Spot on mate.
Timmy, geez, great job showing many facets of a kinky woman's lives, no one has delved better into the ties and reluctance that define life between a Domme-ing Woman and a Subbie man.

Timmy27

I have re-read this story and again want compliment you on a very good story. You definitely have a way of writing that keeps a reader anticipating what is in the next paragraph!
Excellent work Timm 27.