duufus
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thank you stormy especially for your time our entertainment and enjoyment thank you "men in general judge more from appearances than from reality.All men have eyes,but few have the gift of penetration." Niccolo Machiavelli
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baron ochs
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A terrific effort Stormy. I have done some writing myself under another name so I know how hard it can be to produce consistently good prose. This story was outstanding in every respect, and furthermore, even after some 200 pages on Word, you've still left your readers wanting more! There can be no bigger compliment than that. Thank you once more
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CUCKSLUT
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Stormy, more great writing, what worries me is were are they going from here. Will Stef be able to give it up? or will Kev be able to?
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davesGFdates
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Great work Stormy, fully understand if that where we have to leave Steff and Kevin, get the feeling that Steff knows that Kev will change his mind again, so perhaps there is room for more from this story yet.
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cuckold4one
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stormydog: Thanks C-4-1. What's in seamister this time of year? Here in PA, it's gobbler seamister! Stormy, I really have enjoyed your story and just want to thank you again for all the time and effort that you have invested in sharing this with us. Cuck who loves a creampie.
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randyadrian
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Thanks again!
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goodhusband
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Storm
Nicely done.
GH
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subchard
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stormydog.
What a great finish!! or is it?.... Either way thank you so much for sharing this story with us. May I speak for the silent majority who read but don't post very often and say we don't show our appreciation enough for the hard work guys like you, timmy and gh put in.
Thanks again
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goodhusband
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Storm
That was a great finish, maybe your best writing ever. I think for a moment you opened your soul and let us have a peek. That brief glimpse makes me like you even more.
Thanks
GH
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NiftyatFifty
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Stormy Thankyou very much Well done!!
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cuckold4one
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Nope..... Never boring at all!! What a fantastic ending to a fun story. Thank you! Cuck who loves a creampie.
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CUCKSLUT
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Wow Stormy that was terrific. Thanks for all your writing it has been great to read Stef and Kev's adventures.
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Cliffa
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What can I say, Stormy, but as the others do - I thank you very much about this truly interesting, amazing, heartwarming and, among many other attributes, arousing story.
There is always a sad thing coming to an end. This one however carries the seed of many new stories, so you even turn the sadness in hope for future enjoyment. Special thanks for that! Cliffa
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baron ochs
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The Epilogue was a masterstroke, Stormy (no pun intended). I will look out for any future posts from you. Thanks yet again.
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sslv2006
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#345 · Edited by: sslv2006
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This has been a pleasure to read Stormy. I and others appreciate the time you put into this masterpeice. Now, if I can only catch up with all your others.
Thanks. A. Smith
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buzzski3
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Great story!! Very well written and very erotic. Looking forward to some more of your work. Thanks.
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sillyoldman
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Wow, as much as I liked the story up through what we thought was the end, I think I liked the epilogue most of all. Surrounded by Steffany, KatienotKathy, Mandy/Raven and whoever (whomever?) the mysterious Janice might be, Kevin is one lucky guy. And how great is it that he is witnessing little Emily's emerging permisterality that will enthrall, not Kevin (no, certainly not), but the next generation of Kevins. I'm glad that Paul has become a good friend and, while I don't think I could be as charitable as Kevin and Steffany have been with Cheryl, perhaps she is not as bad as I thought.
Great writing, stormydog, a superb story.
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davesGFdates
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Well done again Stormy, the epilogue is a great idea, ties up a few loose ends but leaves things open if you feel the need to return to these wonderful characters again. It takes me long enough to write just one page of a story so I dont know how you manage to knock out over 100 pages of consistently good stuff, you is da man
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stormydog
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To all of you that have read along, but especially to those that have taken time to say thanks or comment either here at the end or throughout the story, you're very welcome. Glad you enjoyed it - as did I! I enjoyed the writing part, but that enjoyment was very much heightened by reading your comments and thus knowing that others were deriving pleasure from it as well. It kept me going!
Again, thanks for that, and take care!
storm
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watcherdoit4fun
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Stormy,
I love all of you're work, I hate to tell you how much your tales have pushed me and the mrs. Into the lifestyle . not sure where it will take us. But I hope the journey ends with us together and inlove as we are now. watcherdoit4fun
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watcherdoit4fun
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Stormy,
I love all of you're work, I hate to tell you how much your tales have pushed me and the mrs. Into the lifestyle . not sure where it will take us. But I hope the journey ends with us together and inlove as we are now. watcherdoit4fun
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simonm
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Brilliant story. Thanks
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stormydog
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Just noticed this had bumped back up! Thanks for the comments watcher and simonm, I appreciate it. I also hope your own permisteral journey works out well for you watcher.
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cuckmuck
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best storie ever
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odyexplorer
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stormydog
Great story!!!
Tough I confess to being frustrated at his turning down both Cheryl and Mandy, who both want him, as at least a friend with benefits. Esp. since Stef has staid she'd be ok with it. In that respect the more swingers, or really open relationship tale of Adam and Kristi is more my cup of tea.
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stormydog
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Thanks cuckmuck and ody, I guess I was out of town when this bumped back up and then dropped again, I didn't see your comments. My apologies for not acknowledging them sooner. I appreciate the kind words, and ody, I guess Adam and Kevin are just really different people - and not just physically! Pretty sure I couldn't have said no to Mandy. Cheryl...well, she might be a little unpredictable! You know, even more than most women!
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stormydog
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Bump - for racingdon
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hassim
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waiting for the next part......
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stormydog
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#359 · Edited by: stormydog
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Sorry hassim that was pretty much it for this story, hence the epilogue. Glad you enjoyed it - I do have a couple of other stories posted here, and if you're looking for more reading material I can heartily recommend pretty much anything by Goodhusband or Timmy, both excellent story-tellers!
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hassim
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I'm actually fan of them and thanks for the wonderfull story you said here.....and also expecting more stories from you...........
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