goodhusband
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This is a wonderful start. You already have me hooked. Please keep writing.
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meme
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nice start! keep it going!
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silverwing
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randyadrian
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Very well written indeed! Please please continue!
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randyadrian
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can't wait to hear more...
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luceiia
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excellent thus far, thank you.
more please!
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ColinRupert
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top quality. hope you can keep it up. sure not easy. all the best
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Blumoxey
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This is really really good. You've done a great job so far. Thanks. Hope to hear more.
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sissyinkneesocks
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This is top quality stuff, please keep it going!
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goodhusband
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It was only then it occurred to me Donna’s application might be successful and mine not. If so I hoped Donna wouldn’t blame me for being unable to attend.
What a wonderful statement to end a segment. So subtle, yet so filled with portent. I love it.
Nice Work!
GH
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faraday5
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please continue. I'm looking forward to more.
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CUCKSLUT
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Great story, cannot wait for the next posting.
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randyadrian
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Very much looking forward to the next installment!
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Dynapro
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go on go on !!!!
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CUCKSLUT
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This is getting better and better, cannot wait for what happens next.
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peakmb
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Very good Jake.
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David246
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excellent keep it coming
david liput
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randyadrian
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Still waiting for more Poorlitlejake!
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randyadrian
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My wife and I are waiting in anticipation for the next installment!
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silverwing
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faraday5
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great story, please keep it coming
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droppinby
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Nice twist, though given the forum not entirely unexpected. Can't wait for the next installment.
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