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Holy Shit! Excellent story, I can't wait to read the rest.
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Great story, very well written and HOT! Lots of good detail and realistic characters, nice job!
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Tell us more, need to jackoff some more
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This is a great story! I'd like to see Cornchip go without sex with his wife the rest of the honeymoon. Not sure how long they are there.... but maybe he has to get back to the states... but she arranges to stay another week. I'd also like to see Tye turn her bisexual and make love to some of the young beautiful women that are hanging around the rapper. That would be the ultimate.... my girl fucking another guy.... and other hot girls... while I get nothing.
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JUst me but I was very excited at reading this. Thought it was so hot. Perfect cuckold theme. But when she had him kicked out of the vip instead of showing off in front of him knowing he was turned on, it ended for me.

I let my wife do anything she wants with anyone she wants. I enjoy being a cuck. But she did a friend behind my back once and we almost divorced over it. Thats not being a cucks wife, thats being a cheating bitch!
She doesn't need mt approval or anything like that just don't hide things and don't lie to me. out side of that enjoy!

After she had him removed all I thought about was packing and leaving her cheating ass there! Sorry just my thoughts . But the first was real hot enjoyed the stage show and all that alot!
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I am inclined to agree with subhub174014. Removing her husband from the vip lounge was not a good idea.

Also, and perhaps my opinion will not be shared by the majority, I feel her behaviour is inexplicable given that it is her honeymoon. I think the basic idea for the story is very good, but would have been far more plausible if the couple had been married for, say 5 years.

However I must compliment you on your writing which is very good indeed.
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Great story with plenty of build up. In my view stories which gradually build to a climax are the best read.

As to elements to weave into the story, Cornchip licking creampies from Alice, Alice fucking other black guys, both being 'marked' as cuckold and hotwife, the story continuing back home.

Just a few ideas, although I'm sure there's plenty more from others.
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I Like this story a lot however there were a few things that didnt mesh. they were best friends so why does she treat him like she cant stand him ? I much prefer the loving wife who cuckolds but still treats her hubby with love and shares with him.
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Thanks for all your feedback and constructive comments!

On the subject of the VIP party, I used the ejection to indicate control of the situation - that Tye had the power to allow hubby entry and also to take it away. Increasingly, I expect this story will delve into the more submissive/denial aspects of cuckoldry which I suspect may work a little better in the realm of fantasy than in practice - so I apologize if this throws some readers off.

It was also a useful narrative mechanism to get to the subsequent spicy scene sooner - I really wanted the first installment to give you all some good action after all that build up, so this aspect may have been a bit rushed as a result.

In any case, I have edited that portion of the story to indicate that rather than being uncomfortable, Cornchip's leering is making Alice smug and confident and the resulting kick out is hopefully more sadistic and sexually charged than utilitarian and cold as a result.

I hope you will enjoy the coming installments (many of the suggestions were already planned, and others will now hopefully be worked in!). The new additions will typically be shorter but this will allow me to update more frequently. . .

Enjoy and thanks for reading!
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Really great continuation of the story. I loved the end of this chapter when Tye had Alice call her husband while giving him head, Excellent! Again, I can't wait for the next chapter...
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Great story, fantastic continuation, one of the hottest I have read lately

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Great story, fantastic continuation, one of the hottest I have read lately

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kapugi

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I love the fact that he has to work on his own honeymoon just to see his new wife get fucked...

I'm ready for the next part. Dpn't keep us waiting!
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great story -hopefull she comes home and gets a black lover who impregenates her
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realy good story !!
it's hard to translate in french, but realy exiting.
what hapen next ??
fingertax

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Sorry for the delay in the update. . .

Hope it's worth the wait!
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MORE PLEASE!!! This story is outstanding! I was afraid we had seen the last of your updates with the previous chapter...can't say enough how much I'm enjoying this story!!!
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Great writing. Thanks for the story.
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wish you would add another chapter.... I swear i hate the way he is being treated and not being included or something and I don't know why he doesn't head home and see a lawyer! BUT the damn story has got me hooked and i am dying to see where this goes
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Jamaican Rap music? Wouldn't it be 'Reggae'?
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Thanks for all your feedback guys. I really have to apologize at how slow I am at writing this. . . it may be a while still before I get the next installment up, but I am determined to make it a good one.

Name: No more than American Reggae has to be Rap, but anyway if you read the story through, you'll note that D-Life is from LA, he's just shooting his newest video in Jamaica
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