Johan23
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Thank you weakone! Very good feedback and ideas! I will consider them next time I make some new ones. A series might be the next thing  But firstly I will spend some time and redo the old ones. Update the design and correct some of the text. Will probably not take very long.
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neils123
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I particularly like "Rub your face in it", "Bothers me", and "Flappy meat". All great!  In terms of suggestions, I'm not much of a fan of the emotional loss - wife actually falling in love with someone else kind of captions. BUT, I know there are a lot of folks who are - it takes all kinds, as they say. I like the chastity, denial and teasing captions. Would love to see some ballbusting and/or castration themes in there as well (probably stuff that I would like, but that there are a number of folks who wouldn't care for). With regard to the new design... I like it, but not as much as the version 2 design. I thought the version 2 design allowed for a little larger picture, more text/background contrast, and an easier font to read. Just my $.02.
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Many of the artists here just listen to the comments on what they are doing. If they like the comments they give more of that venue. Be yourself and follow your own perv muse. Read what others are posting and what the comments about their posts . If you like someones venue put YOUR spin on it on YOUR thread. Do not try to be like the other artists be who you are.
The best do that. When your perv muse is not tickling your id take a break. go to a club a beach or other places couples go and pick a couple and imagine they are cheating their mates. How are they doing it. What are they saying to each other about their mates. What do they tell their mates. etc.
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Bootyz
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What dickles said.
Ideas should inspire you - if some particular ideas do not do so, it is probably better to concentrate on those that do.
Of course, if a suggestion comes up that you haven't explored before, but which mere mention gives you a hard-on, you'd probably be able to do something great with that. You've obviously got talent.
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Johan23
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Wow! Thank you guys! Awesome feedback!
When I read dickles post I realized that he/she is right. It's much easier to write about stuff that turns me on and I will continue to do so. But you guys gave me some good ideas. Much appreciated!
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wizozz
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I particularly liked "rub your face in it". I cannot imagine a sub cuckold going to the grocery store and washing my car with my cum on his face without getting hard. This could be like, ultimate in offense.
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Johan23
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I'm glad you liked it wizozz  Here is four new ones! And also this will make the 50 mark! YAY 
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Johan23
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Okay here we go  My first try on a serie 
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Johan23
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Here is my latest four  Enjoy!
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Bootyz
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Excellent caps!
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audie7111
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i loved the wedding series
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Johan23
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Bootyz: Thank you! I'm glad that you like them audie7111: Thanks! It was fun and a bit challenging to make a series terryforsex: Thank you again for removing your captions! There will be more captions in a few days. I have a lot to do ;)
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Johan23
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Okay I actually found some time ;)
Here is another four. Hope you enjoy them!
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darkforest10
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Suck him clean and on your knees two really hot captions
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audie7111
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thanks for finding the time
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Johan23
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audie7111: I think there always will be time for this darkforest10: Thanks! I'm really glad that you liked them! Maybe it's time to present myself a little  My name is Johan and I'm 31 years old. I live with my wonderful girlfriend Sofie in Malmö, Sweden. We have been together for more than 11 years now and she started to cuckold me one year ago. We have fantasized about it for several years but as you all know it takes some time before you are ready to take the first step  She's been with three guys up to now and we both absolutely love it  When she's not fucking with them we are fantasizing about diffrent scenarios that we want to realize. I take much inspiration from our own expierience and fantasies when I write my captions. I also find much inspiration from all the great writers on this forum. I owe you all a big thank you for that!  /Johan
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Allen
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"Last time" and "Out matched"...great stuff going on here. Thank you again for the caps and also thanks for the ***. You are a lucky man, and she a lucky woman. 
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Johan23
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Allen: Thank you for your kind words!
Here is another four new ones!
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Johan23
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Hi guys! I have been working on my second series. It was really fun and exciting to make. Hope you enjoy it!
I present "Embarassed"!
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And the second half! 
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Hi again!  It's been a productive week. Here is another four!
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audie7111
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wow great series thank you
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Johan23
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audie7111 Thank you again  Anything special you liked about it?
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audie7111
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yea lol i liked how her friends helped out. not only is he humiliated by being small but now everyone knows lol
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Johan23
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audie7111: Hehe, I like that part very much too 
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Here is four new ones. Some changes is done. Hopefully the new font is easier to read. Enjoy! 
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neils123
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Great captions!
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stoneknight
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Fantastic csption 
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unrealsub
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i agree these are really good, thanks 
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Johan23
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#60 · Edited by: Johan23
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neils123: Thank you! stoneknight: Thank you! unrealsub: Thank you!
Without the support from you guys this wouldn't be half as fun as it is!
/J
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