Christine's caption repair shop

She edited out the extra space between it and tells. Hot thread.

You are anything but untrained!!

By God, you are right!!!!!!!

Yes, that's absolutely correct. Nice going, untrained male, you win the prize for today. What prize would you like?

Today's edit in the first one should be a little bit easier to find. Actually, there are two edits in it, but neither one should be all that difficult. One of them was an afterthought.

Oh, and HSS... I _really_ like "Ummm."

Happy VD today!

xoxoxo

Christine

Find both edits in this one

Waiting for Him

His Next Command

He Said You Can't See Them

mmmmmmmm

Taking your wife

Can't wait

Can you taste it?

I must be a moron. I still can't find your edits!

A few for tonight....

If they knew

When you finish with him

Too big

Tough. tough crowd.

I like "Waiting for Him" and Can you Taste it.

An awesome prize would be to see this thread continue. And you edited-out the frame around the picture and added the word be.

If they knew.....is great

Wow, really good! Thnx

a few quickies and thanks for your support!

I Came Right There

Hurry

Latent

Seriously?

A few more for my editor!!!

Every Night

My Place or Yours

Run that by me

Just Think About This

houseslvsissy, your stuff over the last few days has been the best you have ever done. Good work!

Thank you so much, boxjenkins. That is so kind of you to say! Thanks also to Christine for editing & improving my caps, I wish she had more time. Also thanks to Christine for allowing me to post here in her Repair Shop! If you like what I do, or Christine's excellent caps, please let her know too and vote for her thread.

I no longer have my own threads because I get too obsessed. (ok, I have a picture only thread in the sissy section), but no Caps. I post here and in "Sissy Bliss" with the permission of both ownersTara (Chattanooga69) and Christine (bpop). I follow the guidelines they have laid out for me privately and while they both praise me when they like something, they aren't shy when they don't, and I do like that.

Anyway, regardless props to them, please show them you appreciate what they have created. I am happy to be a part of it.

A few more. Hope u like! Hope YOU like, Christine!!!!

Anniversary

Why don't you try?

Date Night

I'm Not Cold

mmmmmmmm

Adorable

I'll take care of you

Right Here, Right Now

We Won't Need a Cab

mmmmmmm

Your Job

Fucked Out

What Jack Taught Me

Pregnant

"Date Night"... Mmmm, nice!

Also, "We Won't Need a Cab" brought back memories. Of when I used to drive my then girlfriend out to a bar, where she would take and pick up guys.

xoxoxoxo

Christine

Great job, Untrained!

I'm glad you're enjoying them.

xoxoxo

Christine

This first one didn't need any editing. I just decided to go an entirely different direction with it.

xoxoxo

Christine

Please Stop

Leading Her on a Leash

Entering His Harem

Beg

Love "Please Stop". Houseslvsissy's cap was good, but I like your version better. I think she is great at picking sexy pics and formatting, but I tend to like the caps of others better, yours included. Not slamming her - she picks great subject matter that interests me immensely, but like some others who cap on the site, she gets too wordy for me. (that being said, her work on your thread is the best I've seen her do. A great improvement over her past stuff. Just not quite up to the standards of my top tier faves). I'd love to see your versions of the other pics house sissy posted today.I am sure others would too. From what she said when she signed on, maybe she? would too. She said she needed an editor. I agree and applaud her honesty.Thanks for your great thread!

I absolutely agree with that statement.

I like to keep mine really short. Otherwise, they're just illustrated stories, the way I see it.

Thank you very much for the compliment on the new caption for the picture. I know she is looking forward to seeing them too.

xoxoxoxo

Christine

Thank you for your honest assessment, Sir. I too loved Christine's rework of "Fucked Out" and would love to see her take on the other caps! I wouldn't be here if I didn't respect Christine's ability and hope to improve (Not sure why this is important to me, but it is). May I ask, who do you consider "top tier" and why? And where would you place me smong them?

Thanks for your feedback.

Believe it or not, I am a professional critic. You asked for it. Top tier cappers here pull me into their little stories and make it somehow about me, even if only slightly. Your caps are mostly about you. Your story is strange and hot, but we are not all you, so that only takes us so far. You get wordy, but among the top tier artists, there are some wordy people as well. Again, their work is a bit more universal than yours.

You are better at formatting than most – in that regard, you tend to keep it attractive and simple. And very few have the eye that you do for sexy pictures. And your permisteral story is compelling – for awhile. But it gets all mushed up in your threads. Your big thread, “Some Caps of Who We Are” should have been called “Some Caps of Who I Am.” The contents would have been clearer.

Top tier? Don Jetman is unparalleled. You should study his stuff. Robyn137 is wordy, but sometimes brilliant. Virtually all of the cappers in the top 20 (with the exception of scarf’s “Vanilla Softie” which I despise) have superior content from which you could learn.

I like Greg Martin and Kim. Chattannooga69 is a hoot (at least her early work). More than others, she is crude and not technical at all. Short, sweet and almost artless – except her caps are the embodiment of SEX and right to the point. She is sloppy. She doesn’t CARE what her words look like. She is all about cum and copulation and absolute fuck me sissy carnality. It is vulgar and honest and crude. You can smell it.

You are more artsy. She is more fuck me. She is the Stones. You are Joni Mitchell. She is James Brown. You are James Taylor. God, am I showing my age? Your caps look better. Her caps – the old ones - ARE better. Because they are what they are. A power of nature. Nothing more, nothing less. Hot, nasty & primitive.

Bpop (Christine) has your intelligence and is also artful, but she is restrained and sophisticated, and not neurotic. I put her in the top tier. I think it is no accident that she opened a caption repair shop. There are very few here who would not benefit from her services. Her own caps are sublime. I wish she posted more. I like her work better than yours. I like it better than most other cappers here, for that matter, so nothing permisteral.

Jacqueline, who had a few short threads (one in the Sissy Forum( (Jacqueline’s Chastity Captions) has the best chastity and sissy captions I have seen here. They are delightful & buried on page 4. She didn’t post much, but what she did put out there was really good. She left something to the imagination. Top tier, something for you to aspire to.

Jane Frezzia is super good, and one of the best here. I could go on and on. There are more. I’ve spent a long time lurking and reading. Don’t even get me started on the non captioned threads.

House sissy, hardly anyone can top you at choosing images and presenting them in a sexy way. I have truly enjoyed your caps. Now, if you can learn from your betters - the top people here – people like Don Jetman and bpop and Chattanooga and Greg Martin and Jacqueline and Robyn and some of the others I have (and haven’t) mentioned here, you could move into the top tier with them. It isn’t necessarily about how many votes you get (you do whore a lot for votes in the sissy forum); it’s simply about how good you are at what you do. You obviously spend a lot of time doing this, and I thank you for that.

I applaud your initiative to improve and I think you have a good mentor in bpop. Not many would come out and admit they needed improvement like you did. Kudos for that, you are right. We all read your stuff and like it. Getting better at it will make us like it more.It's all about us.

Thank you so much for your long and thoughtful assessment and criticism. You are right, I asked for it! I agree there is much talent here and never claimed that I was equal to or better than anybody butyou are correct. I need to spend more time looking at the work of others. I love all the people you named as top tier. Anyway, thank you so much for your very honest and detailed analysis. I am flattered anyone took the time it must have taken to write it, honestly! I am sure Christine and the others you named are flattered by your compliments. Thanks again!

Thanks for your feedback!! Comments welcome, pro & con!

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