wildscorp004
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Thanks Robyn. This is by far my most favorite thread! Love your creativity.
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MrsBlackBlowupDoll
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I agree with morphism: I LOVE "Commitment" and "You Have to Choose." Commitment is still my hope for what will happen to me. It has been my driving, overwhelming fantasy for so long. I've come far, but haven't been able to quite get to that. It is really astonishing to me how on target your captions always are.
Which brings me "You Have to Choose." Way back when I was a virgin, I always had a fantasy about meeting a dominant woman who would keep me that way for good (or many years.) It did not work out that way (and I admit to being conflicted about that fact) but when I read your captions it brings the fantasy all back.
Thank you Paul. Pantalone, Wittol, oblate, abnegator, fellator, pathic, irrumatiophile,fop, epicene, cotquean, skivvy, thrall, and pilgarlic.
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switchpincher
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Fantastic and creative captions as always, robyn137. I *love* captions like "How bad is it?" when the wife takes such glee and even arousal from the emotional pain of the unworthy husband. You rock.
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Bootyz
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Commitment is so good it's unreal! Great work!
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robyn137
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secretaussie
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Don't defy me was very sexy, the girl is hot
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robyn137
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Timmy27
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Nice and I love the B&W pictures. Some how they seem even more erotic
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neils123
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Great new captions. "Poor you" and "The last thing" are both very powerful, but "Treat" takes the cake for me.
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cuckoldwimp69
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Just Wow!
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switchpincher
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Fantastic as always! Going wrong for you, The last thing, so powerfully hot.
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robyn137
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Jeff Meagor
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Don't Defy Me is perfect!
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slavew1972
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Hi Paul,
I want to say that your captions are simply the best I have EVER seen, without exaggeration. Really, it is now a daily ritual for me to check your various threads in hopes of seeing new captions. Despite your prolific work, you still amaze me with the originality of the dialogue in each caption. "Have to choose" is a great example. What a hot caption and so original. I truly consider you an artist. Please, please keep up the great work on all your threads.
My favorite captions of ALL time are (*** are the best of the best, in my opinion) ***Accident*** After the ceremony Answer Honestly ***Be brave*** Be happy for them Be here soon Be respectful Beating Before he goes Better be quick ***Breaking her*** ***Calling him*** Can't convince her Career woman Caught (both versions, especially the one starting with "wax the car") Cleaning it Compliment (the one "I told you, you should try to be interested in men now") Contempt Cramp Deal with it ***Describe it*** Does it make you sad Feeding you Get on with it Get out Get the phone "you'll greet him at the door with an apology and a nice wet blow job. Shut. Up." Classic!!! Girlfriend hates you Give me it ***Hard on you***** Have to learn He was serious He said no Her idea of foreplay Hers now ("the things I make him do, the thing I turn him into") His plan (both versions) Innappropriate 1 and 2 *******Is it too far************* possibly the BEST of the best of the best It will get worse Jealous ("Did he hurt you...") Just mentioning it Kind of cool Last look Last time ever ******Little stud*********** Masters friend Memorable Moving things on ****Nature**** New keyholder New room No ("You said be harsh...") ****No discussion**** No goodbye No help No help from her No more kisses Not good enough ***Not interested*** Not sorry enough Nothing to do with her Outside Perfect ass ***Pills*** Pretty miserable Pushing Rather not know ***Sad ("Is poor Tiny only allowed to date men now...")*** Second best ("May I come in now Sir") Seen enough Setup She never asks Shes all yours Showers Showing you Silence ***So cool*** *****So disgusting***** Sobbing Spikes Start at my ass Stay down here ("You like the tast of your little cum rag") Still sticky Straightened out Talk series This will happen series ****Tighter ("Are your nipple clamps pretty tight")**** Told to beg her ***Too intimate*** Trying her best ******Weird taste******* What gets her off ("fucked") White noise Worship him Worth asking Wrong answer You should have knocked Your diary Your first Your room Your special time Your wife always Youre disgusting
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE keep up the great work!! I think I speak for a lot of folks when I say THANK YOU PAUL!!!
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sluice
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slavew1972: THANK YOU PAUL!!! Testify!
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QUICKSILVER
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My slavew1972...I have been on here for a while...and this is the first time i have been blown away, by someone's feedback. Heck if you had the time, you might think of posting slavew1972's favorites. I would check that out. I am often interested to see what others like. But with your feedback posting you point out so many...I have no idea where to find them all.
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slavew1972
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Thanks QUICKSILVER and sluice. All of the captions in my favorites listing post can be found in Paul's various threads. And I highly recommend going through all of his threads and posts. Nearly every one of his captions is a work of art. He is really that good, in my opinion.
Maybe someday if I get the time, I will post a favorites thread. Not that it's a bad idea, but I kinda think that takes away from the fun of pursuing, searching, reading, etc.
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The great work continues! You are truly the Leonardo of the caption Paul.
"Plan is Working" and "Have to Choose" are snippets of, in my humble opinion, the ultimate cuckold fantasies. "Treat" is so true to life as to be breathtaking. And "The Last Thing" is just a remarkably creative new idea for taking it even lower. You are a treasure sir, and absolute treasure. Pantalone, Wittol, oblate, abnegator, fellator, pathic, irrumatiophile,fop, epicene, cotquean, skivvy, thrall, and pilgarlic.
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This thread is great, and all. But I think he's done better and more daring work here... https://www.cuckoldplace.com/27_69424_1.htmlRobyn137, your talent is some powerful cuckolds brownie, brutha. Be the different drummer.
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faggot89
Fixed. Don't know what the problem was.
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robyn137
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slavew1972Thanks for such detailed feedback. It really means a lot. I took the time to go through all the caps you have mentioned and I agree with a lot of your choices. Sometimes it feels like nobody is interested when you are doing all this so it is nice to know that someone is paying so much attention. To be honest I have delayed updating on here because your feedback was so fantastic I didn't know how to respond but...thanks. Thanks to all of you. Anytime you want to ask anything just let me know. You'll always get an honest response from me. Paul. Here's a few more... Needs more
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Yay, another update from Paul! Seriously, yours are arguably the best on the site (definitely top 3), so I always look forward to your updates. I'm very into the whole chastity/teasing/denial thing, so "That's all" really does it for me! "Soon" is very hot too; I've recently been thinking a lot in fantasy about the idea of permanent virginity for the husband while the wife screws around as she likes - I like the implied idea in the caption that a young girlfriend is going to give her virginity to someone else while keeping her cuckold-to-be a virgin...
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andythewimp
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I love, love, love these captions! Thanks!
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derekvader
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heh "putting your foot down" is great
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cuckuk15
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I really really enjoy your caps. I would love to see some on the topic of gf turnin into an ex. Her deciding that she doesnt want you anymore. That would be hot. Like some you have done in the past.
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slavew1972
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Great work again, Paul. I am just amazed at how well you blend original, hot dialogue with well-chosen, hot pics. All of the new caps are fantastic, I don't know which is best. That's all? Or maybe Putting your foot down?
And I am honored that you appreciated my feedback. You do such a great job of conveying the cruel dominance of the Domme and/or Bull. And your other threads are fantastic as well... Female bulls, Wives driving things, Evil Bulls, Caps based on wife's fantasies.
And yes, I for one pay attention everyday. And I think it is a safe bet that you have a large following who does the same. Thank you Paul!
By the way, I have specifically held back from replying to your post about 'Should we take things further'. I didn't want to make matters harder for you. Seems like Anne is doing a good enough job of that.
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robyn137
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Thanks to all for feedback. I appreciate it. slavew1972Thanks again for feedback. I haven't had any reponse to the "should we take things further?" thread but, in a way, it is intense anyway. To know that the little sex life you have (even if it is jerking off into your wife's underwear while looking at pictures of girls you would never be allowed to touch) could be interrupted or ended at any moment if just one of the millions and millions online decided to send an email is scary. Every time I check my email I get panicked a little. Despite that nobody on here should ever feel sorry for me or that things are hard enough for me. Anne likes me to be miserable and nothing could ever be too hard for me because of that. Although I am relieved when I check my email and I'm still free I guess if I am honest I am also disappointed because I will have nothing to tell Anne and I won't get to see how turned on she gets when I tell her how screwed I am and she sees how upset it makes me. It's hard to explain unless you've experienced the true intensity and heartbreak when you realise you've lost something forever and you realise you just have to cry it out and deal with it. I love Anne more than anything but if she started to fall in love with someone else, if she started to think about leaving me, I would be kind of...pleased for her(?) and I'm sure, just as she wants, I would never see another woman again. It's hard to explain. Nobody here should ever feel they need to hold back to protect me although I really, really, genuinely don't want to receive any emails like I discussed on that thread. I know that might not make sense but...there you are. Here are two more caps. Paul. Getting her wet
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Nice work! God, the woman in "Last step" is so damn hot!
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