something else

I'm a big fan of captions, but a lot of them on here don't do anything for me. A common mistake that I find on here is that some of the women in the pictures that are being captioned aren't attractive at all. Attractive, which includes them having sexy, not so bitchy, permisteralities (I know that sounds gay as hell, but its true for me). I can't be jealous of the sex that a woman is having if I wouldn't want to fuck her in the first place. Thats the whole point. Also, (and I know I'm a minority on this one) I'm not really into the whole "clean up" thing that seems to be a feature in every caption. Though this is probably because I'm not really at all interested in oral sex unless I'm watching my girlfriend do it to some well hung stranger. Another thing is, I'm not really into the willing cuckold who actually feels comfortable and relaxed while watching his wife or girlfriend get fucked.

Anyway, I've decided to try a few of my own to see how they fare. Let me know how you like them, and, please, if you agree with my more milder version of cuckold captioning, do some of your own that I can enjoy. Thanks and sorry for all the typing.

valuable lesson

hidden agenda

personal trainer

letting him down easy

some more

why not just leave?

brian

just teasing

point of no return

"a lot of them on here don't do anything for me."

Good work on yours. I've hesitated to comment since I've not contributed. But I think the biggest "mistake" is when the creator tries to do too much with it. It works better for me if it's more a mysterious tease than a complete story inside quotations.

For instance, the (very well-done actually) "point of no return" above would, in my version, be captioned with "well, it's kind of late now 'cuz he's on his way." Or maybe "guess where I'm going this weekend?" Something tauntingly short on detail, and left open as to outcome. Provoke the reader into considering what might happen next.

Also, it has to sound like normal "real" dialog, and as you point out, the picture should already "speak" for themselves, and should be good enough to stand alone without words and STILL provoke the viewer into thinking, for instance, ... "I wonder what she's thinking..."
Be the different drummer.

yeah I agree. also I think that the believability of the captions themselves rely a lot on what the girl looks like. For instance, "letting him down easy" its got a young, innocent looking girl being sheepishly honest, where the "valuable lesmister" has an older more experienced looking woman being very blunt and cold-hearted. A lot of times you see captionists just do a picture of a sort of hot girl, like meg ryan or something saying something like "you have to clean my vagina now," and its just a bad rehash of the same caps you see all the time. There are so many places you can go with captions that aren't being explored enough.

Someone please do some good ones of their own on here. I'll do more if other people do some.

Breakinglass above is completely right, that sort of disclosure/deception is at the core of a lot of believable captions.
It's a great first effort, what you've posted so far, although it's hard to get a sense of your approach to this on such few captions.
All I know, is that I would really love to see more of it!

i have a comment for the'why not just leave?' pic.
the first part is almost verbatim compared to my 1st wife whenever i tried to ask for sex. she would make me beg until i cried...she used the word pathetic to descibe me.

incidentally i would never be hard and usually never had an ejaculation anyway. mostly just a worthless dribble..

Karen

that was actually supposed to come across as watching her fuck someone else. she's not saying it to the guy thats actually in the picture.

thread starter, search for my username and the thread i created, i think you might like my caps

love point of no return.