smotherme695
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Hi,
I have made this slideshow to go with the story. It is an audio story about a wife powering her husband to be a pussy cleaner.
Hope you like it.
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I posted it on xvideos.com
Any feedback would be welcome....
I was not sure which section to post this in....please delete accordingly.
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janice339
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Really good! The audio with the slideshow is exciting.
There are better TTV services out there than what you're using, I think. That would be the only improvement I would recommend. The robotic voice has a certain passive-authority to it, but the long pauses in the one you're using are a bit distracting.
Do another one!
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janice339
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At around 9:30, it gets especially good. I wish more femdom videos/audio were this powerful and intimate.
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janice339
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Squelchy, get in touch with me at [email protected] or contact me via WindowsMessenger if you want to talk some more about your vid, femdom pussy-worshiping, etc. I wouldn't mind having a copy of that Christina Hendricks pic you put in your videos, if you would be so kind.  |
smotherme695
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Thank you.
it was a first attempt...didnt really know what I was doing.... not sure which pic you mean,but if you give me the min/sec timing, I will see if I can find it....
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randyadrian
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Loved it, very good indeed; keep up the good work!
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janice339
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#7 · Edited by: janice339
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There is a pic where Christina Hendricks (redhead) is wearing a lavender dress. It's a split photo, with her in lavender on the right, and a gaping cunt on the left.
It's at 12:18.
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smartissexy
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The monologue is well written. Enjoyed it. Loose pussy forever.
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smotherme695
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Hi Janice...
I found it here....http://www.imagefap.com/pictures/2968564/Gaping-%2F-Stretched- %2F-Loose-Pussy-Fakes-2
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smotherme695
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I have done a few other slideshows if you are interested...
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janice339
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sladyme695
Well...I like your creativity, but I'm not into the current "magic video" that seems so popular in some circles; the whole techno music+fast moving pics+a little text isn't really magicsis. I don't understand it. I think it's just trying to put a new context on porn pics.
However, your audio story has a compelling nature to it. It's speaking TO the viewer. I found myself listening, although with other pictures up to enjoy, rather than the slideshow.
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smotherme695
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Another new one here.... it is a little more femdom..
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korokoko
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sladyme695: where did you find pics with oversized cunts for the 1st clip? please, share this pics!
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smotherme695
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@korokoko:
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Just search for "ruined"
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smotherme695
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Here is another you may like
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janice339
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Sladyme, I really like your latest videos. Keep it up! The "Pimped to Mother's Friends" is very good. I love the repetition of it, and the voice is good. I wish there were MORE of the voice, imho.
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